Kia ora, welcome to Room 1's blog. We are a Year 6 class at Halsey Drive school in Auckland. This is our learning journey for 2017!
I like the way how you have add lots of interesting detail.
I like how you used the dates for the events but I think you can add detail
I liked the way you used clear language and font. I also liked the way you made a big timeline of the slides. Next time you need some more interesting detail.