Tuesday, 24 October 2017

Authors circles


What can you see? 
What can you hear? 
How does this image make you feel?

Using this image for writing this week we have written descriptions to entertain our audience. After writing, editing and re-crafting we decided to share our writing with each other using 'Author circles'. After a little oral rehearsing we got into small groups to read our writing to our audience. Here is what it looked like.. 


7 comments:

  1. Great Job Room 1!!!!!!!!!!! all of your descriptions sounded amazing and i had an image in my head!!!!!

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  2. Ka Pai Room 1!! all the description on video sounded amazing also how you clapped for you friends at the end showed enjoyed it, Great Sport-man ship room 1

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  3. Great Job! All of these description sounded awesome!
    I had a lot of fun doing the author circles, we should do them more often.

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  4. I really enjoyed doing author circles. It gives us a chance to get more feedback and to listen to others and take in new words etc.

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  5. Well done room 1!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved how all the descriptions were detailed and had a lot of similes and metaphors!!! We should do the authors circle more often!

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  6. Great Job!
    All these descriptions are amazing.

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  7. Tino Pai! I love author circles it is a good chance to share your writing. If you are shy there would be not many people to look at you or listen. We should do it more often. I love hearing all the metaphors and other figurative language in the different pieces of writing.

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